AS opening sequence

prelim task

Wednesday 18 November 2009

Deadly Sins

Sound of school bell.

Camera pans across classroom showing 5 students at their desks looking extremely bored. Showing their individual character through various actions eg: basketball player in his uniform playing with a ball. Geek reading. Goth listening to loud music, class clown lying back trying to distract others. A camera pan, until BIANCA is in the frame. She wriggles looking frustrated and angry until she leaves her seat.

Long shot of her walking out the door. She looks at herself in the door window to see her reflection. Camera bounces back to her and shot turns to a point of view shot, of her walking down the corridors to the toilets.
She opens the toilet door (close up of her hand) and walks towards the sink. She runs her fingers through her hair, while doing so she looks in the mirror and sees a figure of a person in black behind her in the mirror. She turns her head around seeing no one there. She panics and slams all the cubicle doors open to reassure herself that no one is around.
She returns back to the sink were she washes her face. She looks up into the mirror and begins to cough; gradually blood starts to come out of her mouth.

BIANCA
(Panicking making weird hand gestures)
ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH

She stagers towards the doors to exit the bathroom,

BIANCA
(Whilst staggering)
Help!

Shot of her staggering holding on to walls leaving blood marks. As the previous figure appears behind her watching her.

1 comment:

  1. feedback from class about the script
    - it is good shows every detail, makes you want to watch the film
    - it i9s too long and will not fit into the two minute sequence
    - stop when the girl washes her face after she sees the man in the mirror and then show the titles
    - give a clue at the start to show that this movie will be a horror movie.

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